Wednesday, July 6, 2011

How is this song I wrote, opinions?

"You Should Be"

(Verse One)
Moving on to the next
I really wish you the best
Up until now I had no
Clue on who you were doing in the bed
When I walked in I caught you with your hands all red
At least I now know
That it's time for you to go

(Chorus)
You should be afraid
You should be very afraid
You should know how it feels to be betrayed

(Verse Two)
Clearing out the stuff
You gave me to prove your love
You can have them all back
Just take them
As long as you give back the things I had
The audacity you tried to hide it when I was honest
Couldn't you at least have tried to have been more modest

(Chorus)
You should be afraid
You should be very afraid
You should know how it feels to be betrayed

(Bridge)
I could've sworn I thought
You were purposely trying to get caught
As if this were some game
To see how much you can give pain

(Hook)
Now you should be aware
Beware whenever I'm there
Stalking you in spirit
When you here my voice, you'll here it
Now you should be aware
Beware whenever I'm there
Stalking you in spirit
When you here my voice, you'll here it

(Chorus)
You should be afraid
You should be very afraid
You should know how it feels to be betrayed

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